A BRIEF ESSAY

Post # 12 (last post!): A brief essay
At last, the final session! This time, you will have to write a brief essay on the use of technologies within the different subjects you've studied this year (Review/opinion).Your essay should have the following structure:- Introduction (100 words)- Body: 2 or 3 paragraphs (200 words)- Conclusion: (100 words)Useful Links & Tips to write your essay:- Basic guide to essay writing- How to write a brief essay- Practical tips to write a brief essay



In our days the technology is very important for a lot of reasson, as it plays an great role in this globalized world, because it make easiest the human activities and human comunication.

Technology is a tool that allows us to make a lot of things in different areas

For example this is very important in science discovers because with the new development you can get a better perception of what is researched.

An example of this is the case of microscopes that allow us to see things that never thought there was, other example of this are all the computer programs that make easiest the work of a scientist. All these things have contributed to scientific progress and with this the road to a globalized world.

The technology is very important in health area because that allows give better treatments and obtain more accurate diagnosis. Technological advances have also allowed fight many diseases that before haven't

Challenges in my discipline

Today I will talk about challenges in my discipline in differents areas like technology, social matters and education.

First the physical therapy(kinesiology) is the science that studies the human and his movements, when I speak about movement I want to say that study all the fisiology moves in our bodies, but no is just that, also phisical therapy is a "human activity" that search improve that health in people. For that we as physiotherapists have try to be closest to our patients

About the technology
I think that we can improve in a lot of areas in the kinesiology treatment improvimg the technology.
Some professionals needs a lot of machines or things like that to do his job but in physical therapy most of the time you just need your body to help people but also the machines play a really important job.
First, a good treatment start with a good physioterapist but also is very important which are accompanied by differents instruments that has provided for technology, like radiographs that make it easy our evaluation in injuries cases, gym machines to exercise our patient in the weakened area, machines for respiratory evaluation, electrodes to stimulate and accelerate the recovery and others.

In social matters
A lot of the people think that it is just related with bones, muscles and all mecanicall fuctions but is not only that also is a human activity that

Improving the faculty

Hello my partners, today I will talk about my faculty, its strengths and weaknesses.
First, I think that "Universidad de Chile" is the best university in Chile, becuase it has prestige, tradition and the best teachers in the country. Study in "Universidad de Chile" is a honor for me. But like the university has stregths, also has weakness.

Now I will talk about my faculty.
First the positive aspects and after the negative aspects.
I really like my faculty but I think that it has to improve in a lot of aspects.

First the infrastucture:
the faculty is very old, ugly and the infrastucture isn't the best because in this faculty we don't have so many places where we can relax and enjoy doing sports. For example the soccer field has a lot of holes and for this reasson I have fallen more than once, also the gym is very little and machines are very old, also the technology isn't very good for example the computers are very slow and microwaves don't work.
I think that the infrastructure problems are due to "Universidad de Chile" is a state university and for this reasson doesn't have much money and the way to fix these is improve the financing for state universities.

Teachers:
Other problem is that the teachers are leaving university because in others universities pay more, this problem happening because teacher salaries in state universities are very low in comparison with private universities.

I hope that someday these problems are solved
see you later
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